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Old 12-09-2004, 06:51 PM   #1
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Default Could you revise my paper?

Ok...I wrote an article about how the media leans to the left...Now, when I start getting information to write a paper, I always feel like i'm getting good points. But then once I write the paper, I think it looks and sounds like crap (i.e. the points are drawn together well or my argument isn't very strong). So I was wondering if anybody would like to revise it for me. I have to have the rough draft due tomorrow, but the paper itself isn't due until next Friday. Again, if you don't mind reading and revising my paper about how the media leans left, then contact me and I'll send it.

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NOTE: I'm not trying to start an argument and if you want to argue with me, I'll just ignore it...I only want somebody who would be interested in revising, or just reading, my paper.

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Old 12-09-2004, 08:13 PM   #2
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I'm never really happy with anything I write. Always think it could be better.
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Old 12-09-2004, 09:41 PM   #3
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Ughh...it makes me so mad...When I first start I think it's gonna be so good...but then when it's done I think it's *****...but I still usually get an A...AHHHHHHHHHHH
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Old 12-09-2004, 10:28 PM   #4
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Just like a conservative.....wants others to do his dirty work for little/no pay.

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Old 12-09-2004, 10:33 PM   #5
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Not really...it was more of a volunteer kind of a thing.

If asked people to revise my paper and not write my paper.

Like I said earlier I'm not going to argue with you.
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Old 12-09-2004, 10:34 PM   #6
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Happy to read, make suggestions. Not to revise, however. That's your job.

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Old 12-10-2004, 05:26 PM   #7
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I'll have a run at it when my 19 month old isn't so squirmy ....vvob eWqw ZXIO,.H BH (that was his contribution, and he's crying now so I'll be back later)
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http://www.geocities.com/hamptoninli...Bias-Paper.doc

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